Ye winter brrrrrrrr so cool....

Lovely Haiku

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Thank you!

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I am glad to hear that, Brian!

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Christmas memories,
Gathered like shining daggers
Hanging from my sleigh.


Love your writing, it inspired me.

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I was about to say it was very odd to have a spring poem in this season before I read your comments!

The only thing I will say in terms of critque is that for a haiku it is incrediably wordy and there are words that don't nesscessarily have to be there but without them still have the same meaning. It's one of those things you have to play with the words yourself.

For example I would consider:

Garden Lillies,
springtime planted with
honeysuckle and rose.

But it's something you could consider yourself.

The image is striking in the sense of the time of year it is posted. It has the typical nature conventions of haiku which I always like

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A beauty so cold, yet
Warming my heart, protection too
Reminding me of peace.



Lovely Haiku.

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